Tips for Writing to Your State Legislator

The best time to write to your legislature is when you DON’T have a problem. An introduction letter to your legislator or those who serve on key health care and insurance committees is an excellent idea. This letter should be an informal introduction to you, your practice or learning institution and the offering of assistance in time of need. Legislators are happy to receive such letters and will remember you in the future. However, should you need to contact them about legislation, here are some tips to consider when writing your legislator!

  • Make sure that you thoroughly understand the issue you are writing about. If the issue has been introduced in bill form, try to provide the legislator with the bill number and name as a reference point.
  • Keep your letter to one page. A well-thought out one-page letter is appreciated. Your purpose for writing should be stated in the first paragraph. (See below example.)
  • Do not use a form letter or a postcard. Your own words are always best and can make the difference in the legislator’s response and his or her vote.
  • Ask the legislator for his or her help, explaining what you would like supported or opposed and requesting a reply that states his or her position.
  • If you know the legislator’s position on similar issues in the past, be sure to mention it in your letter. It shows that you are aware of voting records.
  • Be constructive. If a bill deals with a problem you admit exists, but you believe the bill is the wrong approach, suggest a better approach.
  • Be sure to use the proper forms of address when writing to any government official. (See below example.)
  • When the legislator replies to your letter, write a follow-up letter thanking him or her for the response. Reiterate your position. If there is agreement, it will serve as a reminder to the legislator and staff. If there is opposition to your view, it gives you one more chance to change minds.

Some “Don’ts” to Keep in Mind:

  • DON’T apologize for writing—it’s your right guaranteed under the First Amendment to the Constitution.
  • DON’T tell legislators how important you are. If you’re a constituent, they know you are.
  • DON’T overstate your case. Make sure it’s believable.
  • DON’T be confrontational. You won’t accomplish anything and you could damage the case you’re trying to make.
  • DON’T use your election vote as a threat or a bribe. This smacks of coercion and will be resented.
  • DON’T send copies of your letter to other legislators. Make sure you send an individual letter to each person.

Attachment I
Sample Letters to Legislators

Sample

The Honorable John D. Smith
Member of the Assembly
State Capitol, Room 1234
City, State, Zip Code

Dear Assemblyman Smith:

Please actively support H. R. 5142, the (name of the bill), which would increase funding on research into those diseases which affect a small percentage of the population.

The House hearings which were held on March 14 show the importance of continuing to study these diseases and eventually eradicate them, not only because of the toll in human suffering, but also the economic impact on the state’s health programs.

(If you are aware of any actions the legislator has taken on this kind of legislation in the past, let him know you are aware of his past interest or voting record. If he has been opposed, ask him to reconsider his former position and tell him why he should.)

I ask you to show your support by cosponsoring H.R. 5142. Your active support can make the difference on passage of this bill. If I can provide you with any additional information, please contact me.

Thank you for your attention and I look forward to your active support.

Sincerely,


Sample

The Honorable Jane Doe
Member of the Senate
State Capitol, Room 5678
City, State, Zip Code

Dear Senator Doe:

I recently became aware of Senate Bill 3173 and I am writing to voice my concern. This bill appears to (state what the bill does in your own words and include thoughts of your own, pertinent to the subject.)

(Stress how the bill affects the people with whom you work and use your own experience, being as specific as possible.)

(State what you oppose or support in the legislation and its particular concerns for your constituency.)

(Offer alternatives or solutions if possible.)

(Show your awareness of the legislator’s past actions if you know them. If you know her voting record on related issues, let her know you approve or disapprove and why.)

Please oppose any efforts to pass the legislation as it is now drafted and let me know if I can be of any assistance in this matter.

Sincerely,


Attachment II
Addressing Correspondence

To a State Senator:

The Honorable (name)
(State) State Senate
(State Capitol City, State, Zip Code)

To a Congressional Representative:

The Honorable (name)
(State) House of Representatives or (State) Assembly
(State Capitol City, State, Zip Code)

To a Congressional Senator:

The Honorable (name)
United States Senate
Washington, DC 20510

Dear Senator (name):

To a Congressional Representative:

The Honorable (name)
United States House of Representatives
Washington, DC 20515

Dear Congressman (name) or Congresswoman (name):

Note: When writing to the Chair of a committee, the Speaker of the House, or a Commissioner, it is proper to address them as:

Dear Mr. Chairman or Madam Chairman:
Dear Mr. Speaker;
Dear Commissioner:

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